The Silver Lining | 2016 PitchWars Mentor blog hop!

Hi there, Pitch Wars hopefuls!

I was an Adult mentor back in Pitch Wars 2014 and had an amazing time with my mentee. This year I can’t wait to co-mentor with Sarah Glenn Marsh! Read through our wishlist here, then  click here  to go to back to Sarah’s website and access the linky hop to the next mentor!

Sarah and I are looking for  YA manuscripts only. Here’s our wish list!


Fantasy of all sorts, but especially epics. Also, historical fantasy in the vein of A Darker Shade of Magic.
Sci-fi of all sorts; give us Killjoys or Dark Matter or Farscape for YA!
Magical Realism a la Bone Gap or The Raven Boys
Mystery/Thriller with a supernatural element
Southern Gothics
Horror (ghosts/psychological horror only, no gore)
Historicals featuring time periods not often explored in YA. Give us a YA book about Vikings, or something like And I Darken.
*Note: we won’t be looking at much contemp, but in this genre, we’d love a YA version of The Big Bang Theory or Weeds!

Things we’d love to see in all of the above:

LGBTQ+ characters as MCs, whose stories aren’t about coming out
Diversity in all its forms
Romance subplots
Family Relationships
Multi-POV without head hopping
Strong female characters
Lyrical writing
Anything reminiscent of Joss Whedon’s work (Witty dialogue, misfits banding together to form a family of sorts)

Anything reminiscent of Avatar: The Last Airbender and Legend of Korra (The diveristy! The well-rounded characters! The sweeping plot!)

Even more things we love include:

Bad boys who turn good, castles, ghosts, hate-to-love relationships, girls in STEM, mythology that’s rich and ever-present in a narrative, strong relationships of any kind (love, friendship, sibling), f/f romance, gorgeous writing, settings that become its own character, epic kisses, rivalry, girls with swords.

Please do NOT send us:

Gory horror/anything else with excessive gore
Animal abuse, even if it’s a minor element
Religious themes in any genre

^ The above will be an auto-pass from us, so please don’t waste anyone’s time!


Wondering why should you choose us out of all the wonderful YA mentors? Let us tell you!

Sarah says:

This is my second year mentoring in Pitch Wars, and over the past couple years, I’ve mentored in many other writing contests like Query Kombat and Sun Vs. Snow. I’m also a mentor for Adventures in YA Publishing’s monthly First 5 Pages Workshop. And if your novel features bisexual characters, I can offer a sensitivity read as well.

My Pitch Wars mentee from 2015, M.K. England, is now represented by Barbara Poelle of the Irene Goodman Agency; M.K. and I had a great time working together, and have become good friends! Also, she’s a Pitch Wars mentor herself this year, so be sure to check out her bio!

Between picture books and YA (the two age groups I write for), I have 6 books announced/forthcoming: three picture books with Abrams Kids and Sterling Children’s, and three young adult novels, a historical fantasy with Sky Pony Press and a dark epic fantasy duology (with f/f romance, yay!) coming from Razorbill/Penguin. I understand how to write effectively for the YA market, and I’m willing to share all aspects of my own experiences–from the joys to the painful rejections–as I help you take your work to the next level.

My support won’t end when Pitch Wars does, and it’s my hope that our 2016 mentee will view me as a friend for life!

*Here are some quick/fun facts about me:

  1. I have two greyhounds, two Italian greyhounds, one Bourke’s parakeet, too many fish to count, and one husband-creature–in other words, I have my own small zoo! I also love to ride horses. In short, if you love animals, you are my people.
  2. I have a Master of Science in Education (preK-6)
  3. I’m very interested in genealogy and am descended from some fun people including Eleanor of Aquitaine and Isabella, She Wolf of France.
  4. I love video games. Right now, I’m playing a lot of Fallout 4!
  5. I also love tabletop games, general nerdery, and attending cons. See below for a few photos of my con adventures!
  6. Some of my favorite fandoms include Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, Firefly, Game of Thrones, The Legend of Korra, and all things Marvel.
  7. The last sci-fi book I read and loved was Becky Chambers’s The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet.
  8. The last fantasy book I read and loved was Kiersten White’s And I Darken.

Shana says:
This is also my second year mentoring Pitch Wars. Though I was never a participant, I entered quite a few contests a few years ago, such as The Writer’s Voice. In one contest, I received 10 agent requests! So I know how to create an entry that hooks (AND a query letter). Each time I queried, I had about a 90% request rate. I’ve also finaled in several RWA writing contests. 
I have formal training in creative writing from Syracuse University where I studied under some renowned literary authors. My short stories have appeared in a number of literary magazines. And I used to work in publishing in NYC! So I can offer insight from both sides of the desk. I also have a traditionally published YA book from a mid-sized press under a pen name. 
My strengths lie in query pitch writing, synopsis writing, line edits, figuring out solutions to impossible plotting problems, and enhancing voice so it leaps off the page. 
Like Sarah, my support continues after Pitch Wars!
*Here are some quick/fun facts about me:
  1. Unlike Sarah, I’ve never owned a pet! I do have a four-year-old who sometimes pretends to be a cat. I also have one of the husband creatures Sarah mentions.
  2. I spent 8 years as a computer animator for TV and movies. I designed the graphics for the 2007 Superbowl!
  3. After working in graphics, I switched to working in publishing in NYC for a few years. Now I’m a Project Manager in the digital advertising industry.
  4. When I was 14, my favorite band dedicated a song to me at a concert because I found a way to smuggle them a scrapbook I made for them. The cute drummer also kissed me on the cheek.
  5. I love all things nerdery too and try to go to NY Comic Con each year with my husband!
  6. I also love basically everything on TV that isn’t a procedural medical/law/cop drama. I generally DVR 5 hours of TV per every prime time hour that airs.
  7. The last sci-fi book I read and loved was Megan Spooner and Amie Kaufman’s These Broken Stars series
  8. The last fantasy book I read and loved was Heidi Hellig’s The Girl From Everywhere
  9. The last Magical realism book I read and loved was Kate Karyus Quinn’s Down with the Shine

Lastly, here are a few quick notes on our process and how we’ll work as a co-mentor T_arteam:

(PS, the image above is the letter you’re looking for!)

*We will give a brief amount of feedback (where we stopped reading and why) to any entrant from whom we request material. However, we will not offer feedback to queries we’re passing on, due to our packed schedules.

*With our mentee, Sarah will be doing the big-picture editorial letter in September, which she’ll send to you fairly quickly after mentees are announced! Then, once you’ve finished revisions, you’ll send the manuscript to me (Shana) in early October, and I’ll do line edits and help you polish things up from there!

*We will, of course, both be available for questions and commiseration and cheering at every step of the way!

And now, head back to Sarah’s page to check out the other wonderful mentors and co-mentor teams vying for your manuscripts.

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